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Using Modifiers to Vary the Flow of Writing

Thursday, June 19th, 2008

If you are looking to improve your writing, my strongest recommendation is to read Joseph M. William’s book Style: Toward Clarity and Grace.  This was the text for my advanced philosophical writing class in undergrad.  I’d like to mention one of my favorite grammatical tools mentioned in this book—modifiers.  I like to use resumptive, summative, and free modifiers.  They help mix up the flow and pack more information into a sentence without becoming awkward. Resumptive modifiers are created when you “repeat a key word close to the end of a clause and then resume the line of thought with a relative clause, elaborating on what went before.” Style at 140.  For example:

The recent downturn in the economy has many people troubled, people who rely heavily upon the low cost of fuel for their businesses.

Summative modifiers are created when you “end a segment of a sentence with a comma, then sum up in a noun or noun phrase what you have just said, and then continue with a relative clause.” Id. at 141.

This last week, one of Obama’s campaign volunteers offended a muslim supporter by not allowing her to wear a hijab where it would be seen on television, a mistake that will likely cost him a few voters.

Free modifiers are those that “follow the verb but comment on its subject.  It usually makes more specific what you assert in a preceding clause.” Id. at 142.

The answer to the question “what is the meaning of life?” is one that I have spent years contemplating over, reading many books and taking long walks at dusk.

I probably use free modifiers the most.  In fact, I used them quite a bit for the law review write-on competition.  In that context, it worked well because a case note requires alot of summary.  I found myself using these modifiers to give context to the facts described without having to begin a new sentence.

Common Logical Fallacies in Law School

Thursday, June 12th, 2008

Law school is a great place to discover logical fallacies. An understanding of them provides the lawyer with an easy tool for refutation. Here is an incomplete list of a few fallacies that I have seen on more than one occasion in case books and lecture.

To beg the question is to “assume its conclusion as a premise.”[1] It’s also called a circular argument.[2] The basic idea is that the conclusion is subtly hidden in one of the premises. It often occurs when the premise is simply a rewording of the conclusion. I remember at least two different professors this year that mentioned the fallacy of begging the question, but they both misused the term begging the question. They used it like news journalists, who often say, “It begs the questions…” when what they should say is “it raises the question.” For example, a journalist might say, “It begs the question of who signed off on the 25 million dollars that were over budget.”[3] An example:

Law students are well stacked because they must be able to afford paying 40k in tuition alone. Therefore, all law students are rich.

A slippery slope argument occurs when “one identifies a range of entities or conditions that are more or less continuous (or that vary by relatively small increments) and argues that something true of some of these must be true of all.” For example, if A is like B,and B is like C, is A necessarily like C?[5] In some cases it might, but it does not follow in all cases. I see this kind of argument most often played out against an action that would lead to further actions. Some professors refer to it as a “parade of horribles.”[6] A judge will justify his refusal to allow one cause of action because it might pave the way to legitimize more absurd causes of action, but such arguments potentially miss important distinctions between different kinds of actions. Thus, the easy rebuttal to such an approach is to try identify important distinctions between your case and others that are more absurd. An example:

I studied the same amount for constitutional law and civil procedure. I got a good grade in civil procedure. Therefore, I got a good grade in constitutional law. (But this argument ignores the fact that civ pro is 3 credits and con law is 4 credits)

Another common, but more subtle, fallacy is the fallacy of equivocation. It is “an argument that is valid or strong only if some word or phrase is used consistently throughout the argument, but whose statements are true only if that word or phrase is used inconsistently.”[7] So basically, this problem occurs only when a word is being used in a way that it shouldn’t be. The deception mainly arises because one word could have different meanings to it. It reminds me of Bill Clinton’s famous phrase, “It depends on what the meaning of ‘is’ is.”[8] Equivocation was a philosophical idea first recognized by Aristotle in which two different ideas corresponded to one word.[9] The law by nature is ripe for such confusion because legal terms such as negligence, willfulness, etc. are defined by the judge’s decisions that create them. It seems that a primary duty of lawyers is to argue over the definitions of these words, and likely they will often stretch the truth of interpretation out of practical necessity. An example:

I spent 5 years learning patience by playing the piano. Patience is required to be a good husband. Therefore, I will be a good husband. (Someone who can sit down and force them self to hit buttons on a keyboard has patience in that sense, but patience in being a husband is involves different kinds of actions).

There are certainly many other kinds of fallacies in law and everyday life. Some of them you intuitively know already but have not learned their corresponding technical words. The ones you should avoid the most and will see quite regularly in politics include: strawman, ad hominem, false dichotomy, fallacy of composition, and fallacy of division. If you can’t avoid them, then you risk getting silently scoffed at by logic students—or more seriously, you risk missing the truth.



[1] K. Codell Carter, A First Course in Logic 95 (Pearson Longman 2004). I highly recommend this book as an introduction into logic. I took three courses from this professor, and I would say that he is one of my top 5 teachers of all time. His writing is clear and to the point.

[2] Id.

[3] See Id. at 96.

[4] Id. at 90.

[5] Id.

[6] An article on Wikipedia points out that a parade of horribles often involves two other types of fallacies known as an ‘appeal to probability’ and an ‘appeal to emotion’. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parade_of_horribles.

[7] A First Course in Logic at 99.

[9] “Things are said to be named ‘equivocally’ when, though they have a common name, the definition corresponding with the name differs from each. Thus, a real man and a figure in a picture can both lay claim to the name ‘animal’; yet these are equivocally so named, for, though they have a common name, the definition corresponding with the name differs for each.” Aristotle, Categoriae 1:1-4, (translation quoted from Richard McKeon, The Basic Works of Aristotle 7 (Random House 1941).

Is Creating a Ringtone an Unpermitted Modification?

Tuesday, June 3rd, 2008

In a previous article, I addressed the limitations of license agreements of major online mp3 distributors.  For the purpose of simplicity, I assumed that any change in the digital file would be a modification that would be out of the scope of the liscense.  In this article, I consider arguments that creating a ringtone is not a modification at all. First consider the most pratical situation: no modification.  On some devices, especially phones designed to store and play mp3s, the phone may be able to play the mp3 with no modification at all.  In such case, the ringtone is exactly the same as an mp3 stored and played on a device of the person’s choosing.  This is clearly allowed in license agreements for DRM encoded digital files. The more complicated question is whether an mp3 that has been edited down to a 30 second sound clip is a modification in violation of copyright?  Editing down to a 30 second clip is likely the more common method for creating custom ringtones due to technical limitations.  This editing could either be a breach of contract or a breach of copyright. Is editing for length sake a breach of contract?  Probably No. Is editing for length sake a breach of copyright?

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